I LOVE IT!!!
MY FAVORITE PIECE BY YOU!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT, PLEASE PUT IT ON THE CLASSICAL SETTING!!! i dont think basses can go as low as you have them going, but i LOVE THAT FACT!!!! AMAZING BEAT AND RHYTHYM!! 5/5 10/10 (+0.072)
I LOVE IT!!!
MY FAVORITE PIECE BY YOU!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT, PLEASE PUT IT ON THE CLASSICAL SETTING!!! i dont think basses can go as low as you have them going, but i LOVE THAT FACT!!!! AMAZING BEAT AND RHYTHYM!! 5/5 10/10 (+0.072)
Lol thanks man. This was the first thing I made with Logic Pro 8 which I'm so happy I got. It was fun to make and good for a laugh. Thanks for the kindness.
lol suck less?
lemme see if i got your format correct, bass strings and cellos on same, snare everyonce in awhile with cymbal, second violins doing arpeggios, violas same as cellos, and a solo violin, and did i hear a siren? its good. my recommendation would be to not make it a solo, maybe only a solo in the beginning cause the melody i think repeats itself. make it a duet the second time, third time duet with harmony (while the arpeggios continue have the duet violin countermelody using counterpoint) accent more with cellos, they are beautiful instruments. then again these are just my opinions :) you have a great concept. if it was more developed it could be a spectazcular performance. 4/5 8/10 (i wont vote cause that'll decrease your score)
I love that you looked into it so much. In all honesty, this was my first song, and it was in FL studio and it became a real mess so I had to simplify it, it originally had the siren and battle sound effects and it was just, whack. The way you would have it is pretty much what I would want to, I really need to remake this once I get the know-how. Thanks for listening and talking about it.
not bad
i definately liked the other version better, i can see where your going with this, but i kinda saw it to the intro of a horror theme (like halloween's theme) it's def. good, high pitched maybe, but then again, i heard your other version first, so i'm a little biased. again, good job with this. 4/5 8/10 (+0.046)
I really appreciate the fact you actually review things and offer an opinion. I actually loved the Halloween theme, I can't see it in mine, but the pitch is similar. I might do a horror piece now. Thanks for reviewing friend.
nice
this would make the perfect intro, its so serene, so pure!! 5/5 10/10 (+0.36)
Thanks man, means a lot coming from you.
very pretty
the loops works perfectly, beautiful use of the strings too, hopefully we'll be in the same collab, mine's quite different though ;)
Thank you! This is a very simple piece. Just simple chords, a nice little melody and strings. But I appreciate the compliment nonetheless. I will check yours out!
Pretty
I like the fact you did a chord change at 0:57, and the more complicated harmony at the end really accented the melody, which a great harmony is supposed to do. My only complaint is i thought the nding could've been more developed.If this is how creative you are, I truly cant wait to see how the collaboration goes :) you definately have a great gift of composition. don't you dare lose it. 9/10, 5/5
Thanks alot - hmm, more developed ending?
That was probably one of my fav. bits - inspired my "A Little Animation <3"
I will try and develop the last bit when I update the song :p lots of complaints xD
Thank you for saying I have talent :D
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very nice
sounds beautiful, hopefully we'll end up in the same collab. the loop works beautifully. even though the i-vii- VI- V (i think i noticed you throwing the dominant in there for the V) is simple you did it beautifully. I could listen to it all day. (at least u used more chords than i did :) )
thanks man, but I dont really know what you mean with the v's and i's...
Awesome Job
Great job incorporating come thou fount of every blessing :) it's simple, but thats what makes it beautiful, i can't wait to hear version 2
:-) Thanks for your listen!
i think the squeak works in your favor
It makes it seem like your in an old house you moved away from and its old and squeaky, but you still remember the b-e-a-utiful memories inside of it. This piece is absolutely amazing. is it published? I cried during this man, (i know i'm a softy). but i could feel so much emotion come from this piece. Thanks dude for writing it, it is truly one of the better songs on newgrounds. 5/5 10/10 (+o.o54) you definately deserve it
I would love to publish this song, but I'll wait on it.
I'm glad that this song was able to carry the emotion I put into it.
Thank you for listening.
Very Pretty
I think it does follow the story quite fully. You have a very romantic outlook of music. Very nice violins in about 2:35 with the countermelody. I think the clarinet could've been used more. Also, the ending I thought was a bit abrupt. With a romantic and beautiful moment of the story like that, I would maybe try to pull of a "Firebird Suite" Finale by means of the overly exaggerated dynamics and tempo changes. The beginning caught me by shock, but I like that effect :). I think you have something great going. The ending could be more dramatic, but thats my only complaint. I myself compose in the impressionistic style, so it's nice to hear a romantic (sort of russian nationalistic) style that you have. GOOD JOB :)
It's funny that you say that I have a romantic view of music, especially since this is the first time out of 50 songs that I've ever tried to actually make a slow romantic song. Most of my songs either had a battle part or were battle-songs all around. OMG if you heard my earlier work, your mouth would drop at what I'm making now.
I should have used the clarinet more, but now I gotta do my insane finale. There probably won't be much in the way of tempo changes, although there will be some. However, there will be plenty of dynamics, plenty of crashes, plenty of brass, plenty of everything. I can feel it coming together in my head, although very very vaguely.
Thanks for the review dude!
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