hmm
You really love the cello don't you :) i think the melod could've been developed a bit more, but i'm a huge romantic fan, but i like the mood. if you can tell in my song (a hopeful heart) i'm a big fan of this sort of mood. I have no idea what happened at 0:53, maybe check that chord, it sounds diminished, maybe try a minor, it might make it smoother, but again, very peaceful, feels abandoned, forsaken, shit out of luck :) very nice